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They say I am the writer of my own life,
but that just can't be true because I only
write of sad things such as
nightmares, calamities, and
affliction.

(I can't write of happy endings,
like lives are supposed to end.)

I was wondering if you would help me
change a word or two, or five, or a sentence,
or even the whole book

(I was hoping that you would help me
write a fairy tale.)

I wrote the beginning in ink, so
we can only scribble out the words;
knowing all too well what is
under it. Maybe, if we tried hard enough,
we could turn the outcome of this
story around.


And I was hoping, wishing..
that you would help me write my happy ending.
I believe we can do this.

Comments are appreciated :]

wthitsnotsadforonce?!
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Slaughter-lord Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
I like it :) its really good!
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
I'll help. ;)
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
xD awh yay. LOL
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009   Writer
This is very sweet, I like it. :)
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
Thank you<3
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ColouredRain Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
the 3rd stanza is my favorite.
No life has a happy ending, no one gets out alive. Due to that, we have to write about happy things sometimes ;)

I love his so much :heart:
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
Thats my fav too.
Mm..thats true. xD the happy ending was more based on the tarot card theory that no matter what happens, it ends happy. I don't think its all true, but can't help but hope, right?

tyty :3 :heart:
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ColouredRain Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
you got it right ;)
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
this is lovely.
it's not too happy.
just right. =]
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
Thankss. xD :heart:
:]
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Amertie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
:hug:
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CandyArsenic Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
OMG ONE OF MEH FAVORITES NOW ;O

For some reason..whenever I write something happy..everyone likes it more? o-x
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
cause its happy..duh.
favorites? woo. XD
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WithoutBreathing Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
You should write song lyrics :D
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
LOL...KYO JUST SAID THAT X___X
I dont have songs in my head when I write these D;<
LOL.. no unless it was a supa emo band ]:
but ty<3
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WithoutBreathing Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
LOL

WELL WHO CARES D:
I can't understand lyrics half the time.
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
..LOL..
why
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:iconwithoutbreathing:
WithoutBreathing Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
cause...

DONT MAKE FUN OF THE ESL KID.
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
esl?
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WithoutBreathing Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
English as second language
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zXGothicButterflyXz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
LOL. I wouldve never guessed ;;
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